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Gaby Boudani


1.     I believe I improved from my first draft. Personally, I liked my first draft and I had a lot of juices flowing. My second draft was a bit scary though because I thought we had to reach 1500 word polished, so I was having extreme difficulties getting my paper to that words count. Once I realized I misunderstood the word count, I started writing again and adding parts I deleted, which I feel made the essay better.
2.     I learned how to analyze and connect parts of my analysis to my introduction and thesis. I don’t mind the writing process because writing is not so bad. I had a fun time thinking of interesting ways the adaptions changed over time.
3.     If I had another week to revise my essay I would probably go more detailed on the ending on the essay when Cinderella and the prince were getting married. I may have concise the ending a bit, but I still think it is pretty quality. I am not sure what changes I would make I would need another person’s perspective to start editing my paper again.
I would change that the adaption could be from before the 2000s as well, if it’s over a decade apart from when the original was written.

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