Day 2 - Presentations

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Taylor wihelmy
The NFLs hardest hits video was very good at conveying how sever these impacts that occur in the NFL can be, this is my favorite part of her project. 

Sarah Liem 
I really liked the text messages between the two teenagers because it showed how deeply this affects a person and the journal entries showed how deep gender roles cut into a person. 

Luke Berard 
The survey was very good at connecting to his paper, I liked that he did a survey with a wide range of questions that covered various areas in relation to makeup. 

Kathryn Herihly 
The creation of a playlist was a very unique idea and it conveyed her idea that music can help you study, you just have to find that right playlist. 

Logan green 
The twitter page did a good job of addressing current debates while also including his target audience which is teenagers. 

Emily Welcher 
The blog was very good at incorporating her personal experience and views into a dense research topic. 

Emily Stock 
The Pinterest blog did a good job of incorporating the various view points on the issue, as well as addressing the misconceptions on the topic. 

Amiyah Lytle 
The trailer was very good at connecting to the audience but also showing how society acknowledges that mass shootings are a problem but does nothing to fix them. 

John Martinez 
The short story written was a very unique adaption that addressed a lot of questions about bit coin. 

Sean Keenan 
The blog was very good at conveying how overtime amazon has hurt the bookstore industry. 

Madison Hill 

The Tumblr blog was very good at addressing the connection between social media and body image. 

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