presentation responses - amiyah lytle
Emily Nadel
I specifically like how she
structured her second genre. She chose a good option of presenting her
information in the style of a pamphlet. This was a good choice because parents
are held to a higher standard in regards to retaining information. Although the
pamphlet was short, it provided enough information about her topic and genre.
Caroline Bing
The purpose of her poem was
a satirical aspect. Her poem was used to criticize the people she surveyed regarding
vegetarianism. It really depicted the contradictory ideology that American
citizens have.
Analeza Newman
I really liked how she had a
whole Instagram set up. She really put thought into her page. The page has a
theme and certain aspects she includes. The page includes artists of all
genres, not just her biased taste. Particularly, I really liked how she
explained each new artist, as well as providing a sample of their music.
Keyana Walker
I specifically liked her
subversion to her topic. She used the aspect of a resume to depict the path and
skills that these young ladies acquire or go through. It was a very creative
and in depth subversion. She made deliberate decisions in her subversion to
explain certain things. For example, she named the girl “Hope” to illustrate
that hope is what these girls are wishing for.
Josh Liles
The purpose of his presented
genre was to create satire towards typical articles in relation to coral reefs.
His notion in his mock article was quite funny and received his intended effect
with the audience.
Lauren Bodden
I liked her aspect of the
memes but I thought they were supposed to be originally created. However, the
memes she chose off the internet did help depict the meaning behind her
research. It was very relatable to her audience and I feel as though, it served
its purpose.
Sydney Sawyer
If it were my project, I
would have brought a vegetarian dish for my genre instead of the twitter
account because some of the aspects were confusing. For example, she quoted a
tweet from PETA regarding the production of cheese.
Garret
Although his topic was very
academic and scholarly, he managed to find a way to depict the information to
the audience in which the message was still given across. His use of an online
survey showed the difference in ideology that our society has regarding tax
cuts.
Haley Maksymiak
Her aspect of creating Facebook
has the purpose of educating the people who want to consider PA school. This is
a very good choice considering her audience. This gives her audience important
information regarding the career path they’re choosing to take. She also has a
personal connection to the topic which you can
Leah P.
I particularly like how she
chose to format her poem based on weight loss trends in connection to this fad
diet she’s discussing. In her poem, it explains the process of the fad diets.
She was very well spoken in reading her poem aloud and it gave the poem impact.
Alexis Aguila
If it were my project, I
wouldn’t have chosen to present the poem. It was quite long for a 5-minute
presentation. The poem itself however was very very well written and
structured. It explains his research very well in the aspect of how lady
liberty deserted him. He should’ve composed his own musical piece to play for
the class as a genre, that would’ve been nice considering he has a skill for
it.
Gaby R.
I particularly like the xyxy
format of her poem. She claims there’s a pattern to PTSD and that’s a good
connection to explain and connect to the poem. The content was very well
thought out in the relation to the audience.
Hannah
If it were my project, I
would just add sound to the cartoon. It was a very well thought out video. The
audience seemed to be a little less engaged but the actual video showed a
subversion of her topic satirizing ads that sell these types of “products”.
Julie C.
Her topic is very
interesting. I wasn’t sure what aspect to focus on, yet, every genre was very
detailed. Her memes were very funny and related to the audience. I feel as
though her intended effect was achieved.
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