Journal 2

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1. After I finished all my drafts, I think I improved the most on the structure of my essay and elaborating on my examples.
2. The most important thing I learned from this project is to create many drafts, not just one. In the past, I have always just made one draft. However, after going through the process of conferences and peer review, there is a big difference in my writing.
3. If I had another week to work on my essay, it would probably still be the same. I felt like I had plenty of time to work on it and I am happy with the final outcome.
4. If I could rewrite the prompt in the syllabus, I would probably change the length of the essay. I felt like at first it was hard to make my essay the necessary length. However, as I elaborated on my examples, I found it easier to meet the desired length.

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  1. Camille VilelaOctober 3, 2017 at 9:57 PM

    Hi Madison
    I'm happy to see you noticed how important multiple drafts are. Also, it's great that you're loving your school!

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