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day2

Taylor   I really liked the video that Taylor made because it was a good visual representation for people who don’t like football. Personally, I like football, so I think it is necessary to have more research done for the players wellbeing. Sarah I really liked how Sarah chose such a relevant topic to today’s times. I really liked her journal entries because it showed how much a person is affected by others. No one should be judged based on their gender. Luke B I really like that he used a survey because it gave a semi accurate representation of the people here. I think it’s really funny that he chose the topic of makeup because most of the girls here always are done up. Kathryn The Spotify playlist was a very unique idea. I like that she included songs that help her study, or can be helpful for studying. Music does tend to affect a person mood, so it was an interesting genre alteration. Logan I really liked the twitter page that he made because it hit his targ

Day 2

Taylor: Concussion Protocol           I really liked how she had lots of examples of different plays, it really showed how often they happen and how serious they can be. Sarah: Gender           If it was my project, I would have also included a journal in a girl’s point of view to compare the difference. Luke: Makeup           I liked the questions he surveyed on people, it was interesting to see the amount of people who feel they need to wear makeup and also the age people started wearing makeup. Logan Green: Music           I really like the poem, it was deep statement to tell the audience that individual music should be free and able to be made by the artist. Emily Melcher: Vegetaism           I really like how the blog post went into detail on all the different aspects of vegetaism, and has a wide variety of topics which got her topic across well. Amiyah Lytle: Mass Shooting           I liked how the video preview showed the reality of mass shooting and the d

Day 2 - Presentations

Taylor wihelmy The NFLs hardest hits video was very good at conveying how sever these impacts that occur in the NFL can be, this is my favorite part of her project.  Sarah Liem   I really liked the text messages between the two teenagers because it showed how deeply this affects a person and the journal entries showed how deep gender roles cut into a person.  Luke Berard  The survey was very good at connecting to his paper, I liked that he did a survey with a wide range of questions that covered various areas in relation to makeup.  Kathryn Herihly  The creation of a playlist was a very unique idea and it conveyed her idea that music can help you study, you just have to find that right playlist.  Logan green  The twitter page did a good job of addressing current debates while also including his target audience which is teenagers.  Emily Welcher  The blog was very good at incorporating her personal experience and views into a dense research topic. 

Presentation Day #2

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Project 3

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Taylor Wilhelmy: I like how she did a video, which was different than other people’s projects, I think it is an interesting adaptation of a research paper. It represents what happens when someone gets a concussion in a way that is engaging. Sarah Liem: I like the journal entries because it is a narrative. I think it flows well and works with the purpose of the research paper well. Luke Berard: I like this project a lot. It is creative and exemplifies the topic through different genres that are informative and visually appealing Kathryn Herlihy: I like how the genres are intertwined and unique while still focusing on the research topic Logan Green: I love this poem because it is informative and flows well, I think this genre was a great adaption, because music is poetry too. Emily Stock: I like the poem, because it is informative for a younger audience, even though it is a serious topic Amiyah Lytle: I like this trailer because it is a very extreme way to adapt the topic, t

Project 3- Day 2

Sarah- I like how she brought to life the fact that people are scared to express their feelings because no one should be afraid to express themselves, no matter what gender. Luke- I liked how he brought a common issue to life because people feel as though they need to be someone else and through his survey he was able to show that people feel this way when they shouldn't have to.  Katie- I liked how she thought about both sides of the survey and really related her playlist towards those groups and what they would see is best for them. Logan- I liked how he brought out the side that people aren't trying to steal from those who started the genre but that they are trying to show their love for it. The poem was good. I liked that the poem used the argument and it brought the argument to life and it suggested a change. Emily M- I really like how the blog was based on her personal journey to becoming a vegetarian and she thought about her journey and what people nee